Monday, December 12, 2011

Did I just read that?

"24-year-old woman breaks both legs after UTA bus hits her"

She was so mad  at that bus that she went and broke both her legs. I wonder how she managed it?

The first line of the story gives a little hint: "WEST VALLEY CITY — A 24-year-old woman had both her legs broken after being hit by a UTA bus Monday."  So she got someone to help her--maybe a mobster. They have experience.

Hint for the journalist: adverbs are not interchangeable.  "When" is the one you wanted, not "after."

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