Sunday, January 30, 2011


I got the same feedback from three different readers of three different ages with different tastes, so I couldn't ignore them.

Much thought and work later, I have the revised first chapter of my novel, for those who care to read.

You can read it here:

Or below, although the narrowness of the frame bothers me and I can't change it. It makes the paragraphs look REALLY long, which makes them hard to read.

Anda read it and said it's really two chapters. So here's my question: is this chapter 1, chapters 1 and 2, or chapters 1-3?

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